毕业论文摘要中译英

发表于2005-05-17 2360人浏览 6人跟帖总热度:10

筑龙币+0

1up_zjl

标签：设备工程工程监理设备安装工程安装工程目标控制

0
+1
0

[查看我的收藏]
+1

分享至

分享到微信朋友圈 ×

打开微信"扫一扫"，扫描上方二维码
请点击右上角按钮，选择

举报点评(0) 点赞(0)

pmer

发表于2005-05-17 | 只看该作者

楼

ABSTRACT
Firstly, the present situation and insufficiency of the supervision for domestic facility installation projects are analyzed. Facility project supervision through the control of quality, progress, cost and safety is proposed. Our supervision level for facility projects could be improved only if all of the quality, progress, cost and safety goals are emphasized, and "four controls, two supervision, one coordination" are achieved. The major three targets of quality, progress and cost are unification of opposites, and the control of these targets should be carried out simultaneously.
Tianjin Subway # 1 Line facility installation project is taken as an example in this papre. The target control methods and their application for facility project supervision are also described.
Key word: Equipment Installation Project; Supervision: Major Three Control Targets; Tianjin Subway # 1 Line

举报点评(0) 点赞(0)

pmer

发表于2005-05-17 | 只看该作者

楼

帮你翻完了。现在可以提点意见了吧？
1.行文要严谨。有首先，就要有其次，再次，。。。最后。
我从头看到尾，只有首先，没有后来。
2.成本，投资在你的文章里混合出现，不该。
投资是从业主的角度看到的项目成本，把投资和成本放一起，
让人不知道你是业主，监理还是承包。
3.短短一段，你一会儿四控，一会儿三大目标控制，
让人不知你到底要“控”什么。

举报点评(0) 点赞(0)